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Offline SirTroll

The Sabaku Kuchikomi
« on: February 06, 2016, 17:54:57 »
The Sabaku Kuchikomi
The Desert Nomads of Hokorigakure

Founder: Vizier

Leader: Vizier


The Sabaku Kuchikomi are completely devoted to the Hidden Dust village.

Clan history:



Before there were villages...

Long before the walls of Hokorigakure, and the thriving ninja village that Hoko has become now, the desert was a barren, and hostile land. Before there was irrigation, water rationing, collection and control, those who wished to live in the deepest deserts away from the close and known oases lived in a brutal, and dangerous world. The wildlife, the conditions, the very environment they lived in, was meant to kill them. Here, in this world where so many perish, a small group of tightly knit, and well organized people don't just survive, they thrive, having built an entire civilization where most say no civilization is to be found.

It was said that the first of the Sabaku Kuchikomi was banished, along with their closest comrades, for causing a great disagreement within some long lost place, a beautiful land of grasses, lakes, oceans, and trees. This group went deep into the deserts, where many of them perished, save for a select few, who turned to their captor, the desert, and begged to learn it's ways. When nothing came but silence, they knew that it was not by the power of some Gods, or even the desert itself which would bring their salvation, but their own determination, toughness, and resourcefulness with what little they had.

These first ones, it is said, built the first civilization in the deserts, first finding the ways to draw water up from the ground, to capture the precious waters, engineer rivers and create their own havens on earth. They used the luxuries they found in the desert, hidden and exotic spices, special gemstones and herbs found nowhere but in the most dangerous and desolate recesses, animal parts for healing poultices, and other riches that were hidden all around them, turning their castles of sand into an empire rivalling the lands from which they were banished. They found their punishment in the very decadence they had created, forgetting the lessons the desert had taught. Droughts, war, and famine lead to a total collapse of the empire, causing many of those who had become too accustomed, too soft, to perish in the unforgiving wastes once more. Only those with great will to survive once more kept on.

Many things were forgotten. The nomads again realized the power in their natural ways. They began to trade with other tribes, keeping on the move, and never again growing complacent. From this, they learned many languages, and understood many different texts. Their goods were traded to the farthest reaches of the continent, but not for gold, or riches, but for goods to better help them survive, to keep themselves lean and hungry. They learned from the past, and their ruins. Many of this clan became scholars, studying not only their own, but other cultures, histories, and lessons. Archaeologists, Historians, Poets, Philosophers, Hunters, Traders, Gatherers, every man and woman filled many roles. The unification of mind, body, and spirit, in the harshness of the desert becoming key above all things.

When the village of Hoko came to be, many of the desert nomads from the deepest desert began to trade with them, and share their long kept knowledge that they had gathered from the ruins. They became invaluable as intellectuals, often trading goods, as well as services as architects, engineers, historians, and other knowledge keepers, using their math and sciences to help build an empire. And yet, it was an empire that few of them would care to stay in. The racial and cultural lessons imparted with the tribe ran deep. They knew the mistakes that had been made, and their people could not be made to suffer further. When asked to join the new city, half had agreed.

That half agreed, only on the condition that their children be forced to live in the harsh deserts with the other half of the tribe, and those born in the desert came for a small time as children to learn the ways of the empire. This way, all of their kind knew to not grow complacent, knew how it was to survive, to starve, to go hungry, and learned the cultural and historical records of their clan, as well as being taught all the fundamental knowledge's in the arts and sciences. Their resourcefulness and intelligence, and sheer physical power makes them worthy adversaries and dangerous opponents.


Strengths:
Speed
Intelligence
Kenjutsu
Powerful Genjutsu

Weaknesses:
Water or Cold-based jutsu
Taijutsu


Rival clans:

Allied clans:
The Nakai Clan of
The Kirishima Clan of Inferunogakure
The Sandāreisu Clan of Shogekihagakure

Members (12) :
SirTroll - Vizier (Leader)
Kildrake - Kildrake
mattaleks - matt
AykMetron - Shinsuke
Gray Fullbuster - Gray Fullbuster
Yellow Flash - Yellow Flash
5HUJA-Shuja
Crono-Crono
xXRenXx - Ren
Drasholav - Drasholav
Sesquip - Gorudo
DarthTyrael - Hayame
RaphoZentel - Izumi
StriderOtaku - Noone checks this cba


Rules:
Betrayal of the Clan – Death
Betrayal of Hokorigakure – Torture, imprisonment in conditions worse than death.
Revealing clan or village secrets – Death
Killing allied Clansmen (not in self-defence) – Given to the other clan, they can choose your punishment
Insubordination – depending on the seriousness, from Exile to Demotion.
« Last Edit: November 27, 2016, 19:41:41 by SirTroll »



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Re: The Sabaku Kuchikomi
« Reply #1 on: February 06, 2016, 19:27:41 »
So, if anyone wants to join, just post an application below using this format :)
Remember, we will be based in the hidden dust villiage

Clan Application:

If you are planning to become a rogue, it's the rank you want to become before going rogue, and the village you plan to betray :P

Name (Forum, then In-game):
Ninja Rank:
Hidden Village:
Chakra Nature (s):
Specialization (Taijutsu, kenjutsu etc.):
« Last Edit: June 14, 2016, 16:27:54 by SirTroll »

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Re: The Sabaku Kuchikomi
« Reply #2 on: February 06, 2016, 19:37:20 »
The clan looks interesting.
one thing I'm not too sure of is that you have a ranking system in your clan.
Imo, ranking is something for in an organisation.
clans are 'family' and it seems weird that you would be ranking your family.

But other then that good luck with it.



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Re: The Sabaku Kuchikomi
« Reply #3 on: February 06, 2016, 22:17:31 »
Not realy nova... the Huga have a kind of ranking system a main and branch families... its based on skill. the huge banished the week to a lower level of the clan. these guys reward the skill advancing them its kinda the same principle.



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Re: The Sabaku Kuchikomi
« Reply #4 on: February 06, 2016, 22:21:10 »
Not realy nova... the Huga have a kind of ranking system a main and branch families... its based on skill. the huge banished the week to a lower level of the clan. these guys reward the skill advancing them its kinda the same principle.

Yes and no, they had a main branch (main family) and a side branch (relatives.)
But it's not like they had different ranks for their skill.
They were born in to one and had to deal with it.



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Re: The Sabaku Kuchikomi
« Reply #5 on: February 07, 2016, 02:07:52 »
Not realy nova... the Huga have a kind of ranking system a main and branch families... its based on skill. the huge banished the week to a lower level of the clan. these guys reward the skill advancing them its kinda the same principle.

Yes and no, they had a main branch (main family) and a side branch (relatives.)
But it's not like they had different ranks for their skill.
They were born in to one and had to deal with it.

The head family was still selected by skill that's why hinata's sister and neji kept getting advanced over her.



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Re: The Sabaku Kuchikomi
« Reply #6 on: February 07, 2016, 02:26:19 »
Well this is really really interesting, good luck with the clan.

And lets just say every clan is different, and its always good to have diversity right
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Re: The Sabaku Kuchikomi
« Reply #7 on: February 07, 2016, 08:05:12 »
The clan looks interesting.
one thing I'm not too sure of is that you have a ranking system in your clan.
Imo, ranking is something for in an organisation.
clans are 'family' and it seems weird that you would be ranking your family.

But other then that good luck with it.

I only chose to have a 'ranking system' so that people have something to strive to achieve, y'know to add more in game depth.
Plus, The addition of a system would allow me to send different specialized groups on different missions etc.
This is less of a typical clan as it represents a group of people all from the same background but not necessarily the same lineage, as I felt that a real nomad group like mine would welcome outsiders who wished to live among them especially if they helped them to survive.

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Re: The Sabaku Kuchikomi
« Reply #8 on: February 07, 2016, 08:10:28 »
Well this is really really interesting, good luck with the clan.
Thanks :)

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Re: The Sabaku Kuchikomi
« Reply #9 on: February 07, 2016, 12:03:49 »
Looks great goodluck with the clan ^^
The ranks are weird, But that is your decision.
« Last Edit: February 07, 2016, 12:09:45 by Reminance »


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Re: The Sabaku Kuchikomi
« Reply #10 on: February 07, 2016, 12:08:09 »
the rank system will make your clan fight and kill Each other. xD

anyways it looks nice,Good luck. (:
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Re: The Sabaku Kuchikomi
« Reply #11 on: February 07, 2016, 14:15:48 »
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Re: The Sabaku Kuchikomi
« Reply #13 on: February 09, 2016, 11:43:37 »
Edited Clan Logo, i think the new one fits the clan much better.


Also removed rankings, It did seem a little off  :P
« Last Edit: February 09, 2016, 11:56:17 by SirTroll »

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Re: The Sabaku Kuchikomi
« Reply #14 on: February 09, 2016, 11:56:29 »
Yeah it definitely looks better.


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