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Re: Hiruko Ennia Yuishi
« Reply #15 on: December 23, 2016, 20:23:22 »
*UPDATED AGAIN*

I changed the story and his personality



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Re: Hiruko Ennia Yuishi
« Reply #16 on: December 23, 2016, 20:33:59 »
Your character pic looks awesome! Also really like the story. Overall a really interesting character
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Re: Hiruko Ennia Yuishi
« Reply #17 on: December 24, 2016, 12:16:46 »
Looks really good man keep it up


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Re: Hiruko Ennia Yuishi
« Reply #18 on: December 24, 2016, 15:03:39 »
nice chracter GJ
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Re: Hiruko Ennia Yuishi
« Reply #19 on: December 24, 2016, 17:38:48 »
Their parents were special because they could control the wind.

whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Like I don't mean to sound like that guy ;_; but Im sure your parents weren't the first wind style users ripp
RIP my old sig, got too annoying for even me

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Re: Hiruko Ennia Yuishi
« Reply #20 on: January 01, 2017, 16:28:53 »
Their parents were special because they could control the wind.

whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Like I don't mean to sound like that guy ;_; but Im sure your parents weren't the first wind style users ripp
"Control" CONTROOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLL. make sweesh and pow with the wind. And making BAM with the wind



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Re: Hiruko Ennia Yuishi
« Reply #21 on: January 01, 2017, 21:35:44 »
Their parents were special because they could control the wind.

whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Like I don't mean to sound like that guy ;_; but Im sure your parents weren't the first wind style users ripp
"Control" CONTROOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLL. make sweesh and pow with the wind. And making BAM with the wind
sweesh, pow and bam...nice, really nice
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Re: Hiruko Ennia Yuishi
« Reply #22 on: January 21, 2017, 16:20:01 »
Changed something again :P

Changed the pic of Hiruko (Credits to Rapho ^^)



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Re: Hiruko Ennia Yuishi
« Reply #23 on: January 21, 2017, 16:46:52 »
Character looks badass! I can see why he doesn't have any friends :D
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Re: Hiruko Ennia Yuishi
« Reply #24 on: January 21, 2017, 18:16:55 »
Their parents were special because they could control the wind.

whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Like I don't mean to sound like that guy ;_; but Im sure your parents weren't the first wind style users ripp
"Control" CONTROOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLL. make sweesh and pow with the wind. And making BAM with the wind

rooofl yeah sure....how didn't I get that before smh
RIP my old sig, got too annoying for even me

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Re: Hiruko Ennia Yuishi
« Reply #25 on: January 21, 2017, 18:49:53 »
Bro the caracter image looks really cool and i love his personality. Good job!

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Re: Hiruko Ennia Yuishi
« Reply #26 on: January 21, 2017, 18:55:45 »
Great image yet again. #bedass
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Re: Hiruko Ennia Yuishi
« Reply #27 on: January 21, 2017, 20:32:47 »
Eyyyyooo  loooks dope af


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Re: Hiruko
« Reply #28 on: April 11, 2017, 09:24:00 »
UPDATE

Story updated... AGAIN!
I wrote the childhood now, after the childhood comes his academy life, his genin and chuunin life and then road to jounin.
Im going to make chapters, after road to jounin.
(and please gimme constructive criticism, I want to improve my story writing skills ^^)



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Re: Hiruko
« Reply #29 on: April 11, 2017, 11:55:18 »
Well, da furst ting to say would be to obviously proofread

3rd sentence;

"Due his injury, Hiruko’s father couldn’t do anything helpful, that means his mother did everything in the household"

Due TO his injury....that meanT his mother did everything in/for the household
RIP my old sig, got too annoying for even me

 

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