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Erishi
« on: January 19, 2017, 19:31:54 »



Name: Erishi Tsuyugi
Age: 34
Gender: male
Height: 1.87 metres
Weight: 175lbs
Hairstyle: in picture
Facial hair: in picture
Hair color: brown
Eye color: blue
Blood type: AB
Primary chakra nature: Wind
Hidden Village: Metal Hidden Village
Clan: Tsuyugi (haven't formed it on the forum yet)
Good or evil at heart?: Has the Iron Will to protect his village, killing all his enemies without mercy.

Description of the character's personality: Found in character's story

Description of the character's history:

Spoiler: show
I AM REALLY SORRY IF MY ENGLISH WILL MAKE YOUR EYES BLEED, BUT I CAN'T HELP IT AT THE MOMENT AND WAS DYING TO MAKE MY OWN CHARACTER'S HISTORY.



Clan history

Tsuyugi clan is known as the most anti-social clan in the whole Metal Village. It seemed like they had no emotions. Their special ability was to drain chakra using their unique type of Genjutsu. They used special unicellular units made of metal and moved them in a fast way with the help of wind (their chakra nature) and sticked them on the enemies. With this particles' help, they could use their genjutsu and get the enemy to see the most horrific nightmares. Even if the enemies tried to get out of genjutsu (only the strongest ones could realise it was a genjutsu), they just couldn't quit unless they pulled off all the unicellular metal cells on their bodies. They could do this only if they concentrated all their chakra in their body and transferred it to the exterior.

Childbirth

Koyuba Tsuyugi gave life to their unique son, Erishi. He was Marketsu's cousin, and it seemed like they both shared the same unique power: to drain chakra from enemies whilst they were in the special genjutsu technique.


First years in academy

As expected, Erishi wasn't showing any emotions at all, he was just like his parents. He never spoke to anybody except for his cousin (his best and only friend). He was considered as a very good student and after the first years in academy he had already learned how to throw kunais right on the target, do the replacement technique and so on and so forth.


Teenage years

Erishi was continually evolving his jutsu skills. He has killed dozens of enemies who were trying to attack their village and achieved Chuunin rank. He was sent in missions only with his cousin, Marketsu. Marketsu has specialised on draining chakra and hurting enemy at the same time using some lightnings coming out of his palms. The thing is Marketsu was dependent to Erishi, because only Erishi could properly stun all the enemy movement so that Marketsu would easily kill him.


Adult life

Marketsu and Erishi received a special mission from the Kage. To fight and kill the only rogue ninja that left Hidden Metal Village. He was believed to be followed by a very strong medical ninja. It was believed that the medical ninja could revive humans, using seals. He only had 3 seals at the beggining, and at the moment when they received their mission, he only had 2 due to the face that a couple of shinobis killed the rogue once, but got killed afterwards.
Marketsu and Erishi left the village very confident. They knew that was a strong ninja, but so they were. When they finally arrived at the rogue ninjas hideout, they saw the medical ninja wandering around. Erishi began his genjutsu technique, and the medical ninja got stunned. Marketsu teleported there using his fast Transportation Technique, and started to kill him. The medical ninja was screaming while Marketsu was cutting all his body into pieces. Unfortunately, a second later, somebody appeared in Marketsu's back. It was the rogue ninja, Sakoyu. Sakoyu was using special insects as his weapon, and he sent a couple to Marketsu's body. Erishi quickly switched to Sakoyu's body, but it was too late. Marketsu and the medical ninja fell to the ground..
Erishi was raging behind the tree, putting his enemy into his ultimate genjutsu technique, which was killing the enemy slowly using the enemys' power itself in order to absorb all his chakra. Sakoyu also fell to the ground dead and Erishi was finally showing emotions.. A couple of tears dropped from his eye, feeling extremely sorry for his cousin. Since then, Erishi is a changed man. He got a lot more cautious when fighting enemies, and went into missions with bigger groups (3-4 people). He also evolved on the emotional part and started to say what he was feeling, what was bothering him etc., also improving his communication skills in the fights.
One day, he hopes to become the Kage of his village. After all, he had the Will Of Iron, the will to sacrifice to protect his village.



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Re: Erishi
« Reply #1 on: January 19, 2017, 19:37:56 »
nice stuff man, also is Tsuyugi  your clan? if it is you might wanna create a clan page for it, you'll get more members by doing so hopefully plus it makes it official, this the link just create a topic and follow the template https://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php?board=22.0, hope you stay around and goodluck
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Re: Erishi
« Reply #2 on: January 19, 2017, 19:46:04 »
It definitely looks interesting, but just in-case, there's no certainty such ability will be in the game, but a good job nonetheless.



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Re: Erishi
« Reply #3 on: January 19, 2017, 19:46:28 »
Not to burst your wonderful clan's bubble but a Genjutsu cannot drain chakra. Not in SLO's universe or Naruto's, Genjutsu simply trick the mind into experiencing the imaginary.

What would be more impressive is a chakra draining ability coupled with a genjutsu.

Anyways, welcome to SLO
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Re: Erishi
« Reply #4 on: January 19, 2017, 19:48:43 »
nice stuff man, also is Tsuyugi  your clan? if it is you might wanna create a clan page for it, you'll get more members by doing so hopefully plus it makes it official, this the link just create a topic and follow the template https://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php?board=22.0, hope you stay around and goodluck

I know how to create a clan, no worries dude :D The problem is I don't want to create it yet..

Also, I'll stick around as long as there is still someone I can duel with.. lol. huge fan of Naruto here..




Yes guys, I know a genjutsu can't drain chakra, I wanted it to be a combination between the two of them but couldn't put it up in words due to my bad English... Thanks for the warm welcomes, happy to be here!

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Re: Erishi
« Reply #5 on: January 19, 2017, 19:59:46 »
tmw everyone wants to be the Metal's kage.
@America, yet another challenger, lmao
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Re: Erishi
« Reply #6 on: January 19, 2017, 20:04:52 »
I thought this was supposed to be a story of our own, like, we shouldn't expect all these to happen in the game. I don't want to be metal's village kage since i have no time to protect my village or the people in it. plus i don't have that much time to play even if these days i am pretty free..
Erishi's story is only how I imagined his life, I thought it was nice to share with you... ok now don't call your squad to roast me please XD

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Re: Erishi
« Reply #7 on: January 19, 2017, 20:08:38 »
I thought this was supposed to be a story of our own, like, we shouldn't expect all these to happen in the game. I don't want to be metal's village kage since i have no time to protect my village or the people in it. plus i don't have that much time to play even if these days i am pretty free..
Erishi's story is only how I imagined his life, I thought it was nice to share with you... ok now don't call your squad to roast me please XD
What? no way, relax. There's no reason you can't aspire to be the Kage if you want. Nobody wants to roast anybody, dw.
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Re: Erishi
« Reply #8 on: January 19, 2017, 20:14:51 »
I thought this was supposed to be a story of our own, like, we shouldn't expect all these to happen in the game. I don't want to be metal's village kage since i have no time to protect my village or the people in it. plus i don't have that much time to play even if these days i am pretty free..
Erishi's story is only how I imagined his life, I thought it was nice to share with you... ok now don't call your squad to roast me please XD
What? no way, relax. There's no reason you can't aspire to be the Kage if you want. Nobody wants to roast anybody, dw.

The thing is I don't want to be a Kage... I have projects to work on, I know you'd think that I just wanna act big right now but my life is so damn busy right now and I really don't have time to be a Kage or something.. I am aiming for Metal's Police Guard, or who knows... maybe gonna be part of an independent organisation

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Re: Erishi
« Reply #9 on: January 19, 2017, 20:19:49 »
Nice character and Welcome to SLO


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Re: Erishi
« Reply #10 on: January 19, 2017, 20:21:01 »
I thought this was supposed to be a story of our own, like, we shouldn't expect all these to happen in the game. I don't want to be metal's village kage since i have no time to protect my village or the people in it. plus i don't have that much time to play even if these days i am pretty free..
Erishi's story is only how I imagined his life, I thought it was nice to share with you... ok now don't call your squad to roast me please XD
What? no way, relax. There's no reason you can't aspire to be the Kage if you want. Nobody wants to roast anybody, dw.

The thing is I don't want to be a Kage... I have projects to work on, I know you'd think that I just wanna act big right now but my life is so damn busy right now and I really don't have time to be a Kage or something.. I am aiming for Metal's Police Guard, or who knows... maybe gonna be part of an independent organisation
No problem man. I don't think you're acting big at all, I totally understand. It's your shinobi life online, you can do whatever you want.
Also, welcome to SLO, enjoy your stay. Was rude of me not to remember to say that , sorry. :)
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Re: Erishi
« Reply #11 on: January 19, 2017, 20:44:19 »
nice character man, stay active and enjoy your stay  ;)




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« Reply #12 on: January 19, 2017, 21:27:25 »
Nice character! Welcome to the community man :D
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Re: Erishi
« Reply #13 on: January 19, 2017, 21:42:19 »
Welcome to SLO! Hope you stay active :D

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Re: Erishi
« Reply #14 on: January 19, 2017, 22:11:39 »
What? no way, relax. There's no reason you can't aspire to be the Kage if you want. Nobody wants to roast anybody, dw.








Back to topic, looks good! Hope you enjoy your stay and stick around :3
Hidden Metal will be pleased with such an aspiring Shinobi.
« Last Edit: January 19, 2017, 22:13:59 by DarthTyrael »




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