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OSamuraiSan
« on: April 05, 2017, 10:39:55 »


OSamurai with his companion Aogami
(art by our man Dart ! :D )
Name: OSamurai
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Height: 6'0
Weight: 75 kg
Hairstyle: Bald with a long ponytail
Facial hair: Goatee
Hair color: Black
Eye color: Blue
Blood type: O +ve
Primary chakra nature: Katon
Hidden Village: Heizugakure
Clan: N/A
Good or evil at heart?: Too good for this world :3

Description of the character's personality: 
O Samurai is a highly righteous individual who values justice above everything and everyone. A bit perverted, though, O Samurai is a traveler loyal to his village. Unlike stereotypical men of his character, O Samurai is not grumpy, humor plays an important role in his life. O Samurai is always seen in the company of a blue furry wolf dog, Aogami (nicknamed Ao, after the color of his fur). He keeps an eye on O Samurai's perverted shenanigans and always spoils his plans on hitting on girls. But still, he is the most important being in O Samurai's life. Other than this, O Samurai is also a hardcore foodie.

Description of the character's history:
Okabe was born in a family of farmers who were not so well off, hence his childhood was devoid of many of the basic privileges that a kid of his age had. But that did not stop him from having fun with his friends and peeking into hot springs (HENTAIII!). He had observed how the rich would abuse their powers and mistreat the poor as well as the poor commit heinous crimes, even though they could have easily avoided it. Seeing all these he concluded that evil was lurking in every level of the society and even though there were laws as well as law enforcers, people were still committing acts of injustice. All these thoughts used to pain him a lot and are one of the main things which molded him into his present persona. Days passed as he and a couple of his friends started helping civilians and stopped petty thieves from stealing.
One day Okabe had gone to see the Annual fest of Heizugakure. He was amazed by the shinobis and their skills and the way they sacrificed their lives to protect them. He silently wished to be one when he grew up. By the time the parade and the celebrations were over, it was late. He had his dinner in a nearby Ramen shop and started rushing home. Belonging to the lower middle class, his home was situated in a shady neighborhood. As he ran down the darker roads leading to his home, he heard a muffled scream of a woman in a dark alley towards his right. He stopped and tiptoed near the hushed commotion and the woman's frantic cries of help. He reached the spot and hid behind a wall. As soon as he peeped over it, he got a shock of his life.
His knuckles, clenching the wall went white as he gritted his teeth. He saw two men had subdued a desperate woman who's clothing were torn and battered. One of the men had started to undress. Seeing him, she started to scream louder.
"I have to stop them." Okabe muttered as his body started shaking with anger, "I have to."
But he could not move. He saw those two bulky men and then thought about his 10-year-old inexperienced self. Would he stand a chance against those two? He shut his eyes to clear his mind.
'What do I do?'
He looked up again, the man was almost laying on her. Suddenly, she freed one of her hand and slapped the man across his face as tears poured out of her eyes. Okabe felt the slap too.
'That lady is weak too,' He thought, 'But she dared slap her molesters.' A new found energy gushed inside Okabe as he Shouted and jumped over the wall.
"WHAT ARE YOU GUYS! MONSTERS!?"
The men were surprised to see a little boy but then laughed at him, "Run away boy, or we come to you after we are done with her."
Okabe picked a big stone nearby and hit the man on top of the woman on his head with it.
"OWW! you fucking brat!" The stone had opened the skin on his skull as he bled profusely from it. The other man rushed towards Okabe. Okabe reacted quickly by running towards the wounded man, picking up a discarded wooden staff on his way and going for a hit. The man intercepted the blow and caught hold of his stick.
"Trying to be a hero I see, well... TAKE THIS!" The man thrust the staff towards Okabe. Okabe fell a meter away, doubled up in pain. The man gave a hissing sound and smiled evilly as he returned his gaze to the woman.
"Where do you think you are going, lady?" He forced himself on her only to be pushed away by Okabe.
"YOU DARE TOUCH HER AGAIN!" He screamed, not sure what he would do if they disobeyed him.
The man snarled. "Get the fuck off Kiddo, we in no mood to kill children today."
Okabe did not budge.

The two men closed on Okabe who was standing between the woman and the two men, swearing to kill them both. The men were almost on Okabe when-

"Didn't you hear what the boy said."
The burly men turned around and searched for the source of the voice. "Or what? You'll break our boners?"           

"Probably." The voice replied. As another man, in his thirties emerged from the shadows. Wearing traditional Kamishimo and carrying a katana.
Ignoring what he said, the men kicked Okabe aside and just before they could touch the woman, the stranger hit them between their legs with the hilt of his katana at lightning speed making them pass out after a pair of painful screams.

After a moment of silence, the stranger took off his kataginu and covered the tattered lady, lighting a little fire to keep her warm. He then went over to Okabe and helped him up.
"Good job little man, be proud of yourself and run home. I'll take care of this lady."
Okabe was really thankful to the man. He wanted to say something to him but did not know what.
"By the way kid," the man started, "Whats your name?"
"O..Okabe..." He replied.
"Ah, Okabe, I'll remember that."
"Will you...." Okabe started, "Will you teach me to fight?"
The man was surprised at Okabe pitching such a question, but now was not the time to chat up with young boys, "Sure, seek me out tomorrow morning, now go!"
Okabe smiled as he turned and ran home. It was after he reached his place, he realized,
"Oh damn! I forgot to ask his name."   

TBC....

thanks for the help with the lore @Toratsume Nyshn

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« Last Edit: April 26, 2017, 15:53:10 by HiChikara »



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Re: OSamuraiSan
« Reply #1 on: April 05, 2017, 11:02:27 »
Looks good, I enjoyed the formatting.
Will you pick a traditional japanese name or stick to Osamurai?



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Re: OSamuraiSan
« Reply #2 on: April 05, 2017, 11:04:09 »
gj gj :) liking the history so far!

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Re: OSamuraiSan
« Reply #3 on: April 05, 2017, 11:34:02 »
Welcome,samurai.

Your story is one of the few,i was actually reading till the end,i really like it.
Not too OP,not too boring,with a dark and somewhat realistic touch to it,without beeing too edgy.
Would love to see more!
« Last Edit: April 05, 2017, 13:21:10 by Tameshi Hinode »
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Re: OSamuraiSan
« Reply #4 on: April 05, 2017, 12:35:10 »
*wipes tear*

That was kinda intense...wew

good story dude good story
RIP my old sig, got too annoying for even me

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Re: OSamuraiSan
« Reply #5 on: April 05, 2017, 13:02:42 »
Looks good, I enjoyed the formatting.
Will you pick a traditional japanese name or stick to Osamurai?
Welp thanks :3 .... the reason behind OSamurai being the name will be revealed soon  :)


gj gj :smiley: liking the history so far!
Arigato Elder-sama :)


Welcome,samurai.

Your story is one of the few,i was actually reading till the end,i really like it.
Not too OP,not too boring,with a dakr and somewhat realistic touch to it,without beeing too edgy.
Would love to see more!
Thanks for the feedback  :) I guess I'll make it a three parter or four parts.. idk I want to wrap this up quickly, but will not disappoint you :)


wipes tear

That was kinda intense...wew

good story dude good story
:o OMG the inspiration himself!
thanks a lot sir! :3

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Re: OSamuraiSan
« Reply #6 on: April 05, 2017, 13:21:26 »
Looks good
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Re: OSamuraiSan
« Reply #7 on: April 05, 2017, 14:49:24 »
ayyy very nice, lol i rlly liked the story ^^
can't wait to see more xd
omoshiroi xddd




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Re: OSamuraiSan
« Reply #8 on: April 05, 2017, 15:16:27 »
Good job on the backstory OSamurai!
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Re: OSamuraiSan
« Reply #9 on: April 05, 2017, 17:39:31 »
good job with the presentation :)
and that beard tho...

remember when we were brainstorming how he'd look xD
ofc you do!
« Last Edit: April 05, 2017, 17:41:04 by Toratsume Nyshn »




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Re: OSamuraiSan
« Reply #10 on: April 05, 2017, 18:19:47 »
Looks good
thanks man :)


ayyy very nice, lol i rlly liked the story ^^
can't wait to see more xd
omoshiroi xddd

Lol arigato gozaimasu!  ;D
Will be uploading next Chapter soon!


Good job on the backstory OSamurai!
thanks bruh :)


good job with the presentation :)
and that beard tho...

remember when we were brainstorming how he'd look xD
ofc you do!
lol yeah... the beard happened :P
thanks and ofc I remember xD

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Re: OSamuraiSan
« Reply #11 on: April 05, 2017, 19:14:32 »
Nice Essey, really like it.
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Re: OSamuraiSan
« Reply #12 on: April 05, 2017, 20:52:24 »
Nice character HiChikara :) i really like it, great work on the history.
(Happy to know that you loved the character xD)

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Re: OSamuraiSan
« Reply #13 on: April 06, 2017, 08:51:22 »
Weeeeey i like this!!
Good job.


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Re: OSamuraiSan
« Reply #14 on: April 06, 2017, 13:24:52 »
Nice Essey, really like it.

Thank you :)


Nice character HiChikara :) i really like it, great work on the history.
(Happy to know that you loved the character xD)
Thanks DarT. More coming soon.
(Of course I loved the character. <3 thanks again for making it! :D)


Weeeeey i like this!!
Good job.
Thank you thank you!! :)

 

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