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Offline Craz3upuppetmaster

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Shemero
« on: July 08, 2017, 10:27:11 »
Name: Sherero
Age:19
Gender: Male
Height: 5,8
Weight: 180 lbs
Hairstyle: long white hair few inches past shoulder
Facial hair: none
Hair color: Dark Brown
Eye color: blue
Blood type: A
Primary chakra nature: earth
Hidden Village: rogue ninja from Hokorigakure
Clan: none
Organization:
Good or evil at heart?: Most would say evil he deos what ever it takes to reach his goal.
Wepons:  kunai for long ranged attacks and big sword for close combat
Combat style: ninjustu mostly used for defense focus on closing in on the target and cutting them to pieces!

Back story: Born 6 years before the last great ninja war, at the  age of 6 Shemero parents had to go fight in the last
Great ninja war so he went to live with his grandma. 2 months later days after he got into the academy he came home
to news both of his parents died in a battle with the Kage of a rival village. At this point Shemero started to grow
a hatred for all of the other villages. He did great in the academy because he came to the conclusion that the
only thing he could do for the other people not to feel his lonliness and pain of lossing his parents is to become strong
then become the Kage of his village. But he could not put his hatred aside with his parents death still so fresh in his mind
when he sparred with the other class mates he would attack very aggressively and would attack to hurt his class mates.
He believed that only the strong will survive in the ninja world only the strong will survive in what he now saw as
a broken system that he was going to fix no matter what he has to do. He passed  the academy and was placed into a team.
While they were out on a mission they were ambushed by rogue ninjas. He fought as hard as he could but he still could not
do anything to help the others they were out numbered. as he watched his fellow conrads die he got angrier and angrier, when he saw his sensei
get stabbed in the gut and fall over he blacked out before slaughtering the rest of the rogue ninja.
When he  later woke up he found himself laying on the ground, a man was standing over him wearing a mask with a symbol on it, one he saw on all
the other ninjas he had just killed. The man stared at him a bit and right as he jumped up to attack the man countered it and pinned
him against the tree that he passed out over. The man said he was the leader of the rogue ninjas and he was watching the
entire time, but if his ninjas were weak enough to die from a mere 15 year old they were not strong enough to live in this world
He asked Shemero for his name and after giving it to him the man gave 2 options. Go work for him, or be killed. Shemero was shocked,
he did not know what to say. He told the man what happened to him as a child and how he felt about the Kages. The man promised
he would help him with his goal if he helped him build up the funds to kill all the Kages and help the people. What he was
not telling Shemero was that it was all a lie, he was in fact just a money hungry bandit. Sheremo spent
years working for the leader of the bandits, the man trained him and made him a powerful ninja, a master with a 2 handed sword.
He knew at this point that the bandits did not care for anything but money. However he had no where else to go
as he betrayed his village, so he stayed and for a little while he told himself that he belonged with the bandits, they were bad people just like him.
Shemero started hearing rumours about a group of outlaws that had only one goal, to unite all of the villages under one banner, They were called Katakiuchi.
He then knew where he belonged and seeked out to find them and join them as he too had that dream.
« Last Edit: July 11, 2017, 10:50:08 by Craz3upuppetmaster »


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Re: Shemero
« Reply #1 on: July 08, 2017, 10:56:40 »
Please tell if you see any typos and is poorly written.
Based on this...
Sheremo started the grow
a hatred
*to grow; and discontinuous sentence.


He did great in the academy only for ther reason he came to the consultation
More discontinued sentences, *there/the (idk)
Didn't quite grasp this sentence


death still so fresh in in mind
*in in (repetition)


anger-er
*angrier


roamers
*Rumors/ *Rumours


Overlooked a stuff cuz they weren't as bothersome... not to forget, unnecessary discontinued sentences and
Spoiler: show
dead parents :P (cliche)


Also, you should first Apply for kata before putting it in your org section.
Yeah you will surely get accepted... still, it's a good practice.

Welcome to SLO, hope you have fun :)







« Last Edit: July 08, 2017, 10:59:36 by Toratsume Nyshn »




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Re: Shemero
« Reply #2 on: July 08, 2017, 11:04:47 »
Yo! Sheremo! Nice name. Welcome to SLO!! :D :D


EDIT: LOL just noticed...:P idk which is true... the title says "Shemero" but you've written "Sheremo"
« Last Edit: July 08, 2017, 11:07:05 by HiChikara »

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Re: Shemero
« Reply #3 on: July 08, 2017, 12:10:21 »
Welcome to the forums, mate.
And yea, you have to apply for and get accepted into a clan and or organization before you can claim to be a member.
Again, welcome to SLO. Enjoy your stay.
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Re: Shemero
« Reply #4 on: July 08, 2017, 14:28:10 »
Welcome to SLO.
internet sensation
also known as Snoopy
has a bigger dick than you

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Re: Shemero
« Reply #5 on: July 08, 2017, 20:31:50 »
Nice RPC. Nice story. Sorry about the grammer Nazi's on the forums lol Welcome SLO enjoy your stay and hop ingame soon ^__^
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Re: Shemero
« Reply #6 on: July 09, 2017, 11:28:58 »
Tatsuo being an SS grammar nazi lmao but welcome to SLO. Looking forward to seeing you around


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Re: Shemero
« Reply #7 on: July 09, 2017, 14:02:26 »
Welcome to SLO. And Nyshn don't be such a grammar nazi pliz



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Re: Shemero
« Reply #8 on: July 09, 2017, 14:52:36 »
Tatsuo being an SS grammar nazi lmao but welcome to SLO. Looking forward to seeing you around
Welcome to SLO. And Nyshn don't be such a grammar nazi pliz
He asked for it... and I can't waste my posts with dry welcome to slo/ lmao/ good luck just being helpful plis.




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Re: Shemero
« Reply #9 on: July 09, 2017, 19:18:10 »
Welcome to the forums.
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Re: Shemero
« Reply #10 on: July 10, 2017, 23:17:34 »
Yea i i did ask for it XD i did not realize i type so bad lol and thx!
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