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Author Topic: Toshiro Yoshiaki  (Read 4386 times)

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Toshiro Yoshiaki
« on: June 29, 2015, 23:42:50 »
Name: Toshiro Kiiroissan
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 135 lbs
Hairstyle: Short, unkempt.
Facial hair: None
Hair color: Yellow
Eye color: Dark Blue
Blood type: AB+
Primary chakra nature: Earth
Village: Okagakure
Clan: Kirioissan
Org: Roguhanta
Good or evil at heart?: Neutral, though leaning towards Good.

Description of the character's personality: He tends to be level-headed, focusing on the area around him. He keeps himself in a power-position, and tends to lose his usual cool when taken out of power in a situation. (etc, when he starts losing a debate badly) In person, Toshiro will tend to act un-caring, though he has each person's best interests in mind when not confronting an enemy.

Description of the character's history: Toshiro made up his mind that he wanted to become a Ninja, no matter the costs. He started learning by watching older children who were in the Academy, and then he eventually made his own way in with what he learned both by observation and co-operating with other young Kirioissan clan members.He had dealt with his father's death at the hands of a rogue ninja, at the age of 5, and still curses them for it, despite a good reason. Eventually, he became a self-made man and an asset to Okagakure. Though his main Chakra element is Earth, he can use some Fire Jutsu as well, most of the time to catch an enemy off guard. So far he stands as a Jounin-Ranked Ninja, serving Okagakure proudly.
« Last Edit: July 03, 2015, 21:54:43 by BeowulfsBane »


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Re: Toshiro Yoshiaki
« Reply #1 on: June 30, 2015, 09:14:24 »
I really like your character's personality and i would like to see more in-depth history
also uchiha clan is not a part of SLO so you cant use that.
You should also improve your template a bit by using
Name: Toshiro Yoshiaki
Age: 23
Gender: Male

Also add your character's picture, make it by using the following site
http://v3rc4.deviantart.com/art/Naruto-OC-generator-MALE-383094951

also if you want an example you can scroll down in the SLO Character section and read other people's posts


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Re: Toshiro Yoshiaki
« Reply #2 on: June 30, 2015, 12:54:20 »
I actually don't have an imgur or anything to post it to, but I'll try to get one. Also, on note of the Uchiha thing.. I'll change that in just a second!

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Re: Toshiro Yoshiaki
« Reply #3 on: July 02, 2015, 12:08:51 »
Good character all in all.
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Re: Toshiro Yoshiaki
« Reply #4 on: July 02, 2015, 18:15:00 »
Thanks Reminance! Anything you think I could've done better on?

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Re: Toshiro Yoshiaki
« Reply #5 on: July 03, 2015, 18:54:52 »
Nope its good ^^
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Re: Toshiro Yoshiaki
« Reply #6 on: July 03, 2015, 22:28:41 »
This is much better: http://hapuriainen.deviantart.com/art/Naruto-character-creator-128745915
And just screenshot then upload to imgur you don't need an account.
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