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Hayame
« on: June 14, 2016, 14:53:21 »
Original sketch



Many thanks to @RaphoZentel, who was so kind to make a digital version of my character!


Name: Hayame (, means "Falcon Eye")
Title: The Desert Python / The Mirage (Depending on specialization options, respectively)
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Height: 1.82 Meters
Weight: 83 Kg
Hairstyle: Ponytail
Facial hair: Scruffy.
Hair color: Dark Brown
Eye color: Hazel
Blood type: A-
Primary chakra nature: Earth
Hidden Village: Hokorigakure (Dust Village)
Rank: Kage
Clan: Born in and leader of Kitsune Branch of Sabaku Kuchikomi || Temporary leader of Tokage Branch of the Sabaku Kuchikomi
Organisation: Rōguhantā Mura Purotekutā
Alignment : Neutral Good
Specialization: Fuuinjutsu(if possible, if not: Genjutsu) || (Barrier)Ninjutsu, Earth Style Nin-Taijutsu (last two are above average in skill, not a specialty)
Special Techniques: Sage Mode, Summoning (needed for Sage Mode)

Sage Mode Techniques
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Adamantine Sealing Chains
(Shoots out chains from his back with sharp edges (6 max.), that will try to cut or puncture the target, sealing the chakra from the portion of the body in question, rendering it useless)

Adamantine Sealing Chains - Barrier
(creates dome like barrier that shields user from harm and absorbs chakra to user if attached still. Distance may vary with chakra use)

Samsara Calligraphy - Mind/Body/Motion
(Allows user to harm chakra flow by writing ink in the air with respective character (mind = head, causes dizziness, body = torso, causes stun, motion = arms or legs, causes slow)

Sage Art: Divine Seal of the Earth
(Creates a large ravine under the target, with sealing characters on both sides of the crack. When the two sides meet, whatever is in the ravine is sealed away)

Earth Style - New Eden
(bit like Chibaku Tensei but starts with very condensed Earth which expands by adding more boulders and condenses once more thus creating a stronger pull and has it's maximum (Drains an awful lot of chakra))

Sage Style Ultimate - Earth Style: Wrath of Gaya
(Often needs the help of more Earth Style users to pull this off. Summons a titan sized earth golem, with Hayame sitting in its chest, which is freely controlled by the user. Being made entirely out of earth makes its body a huge source of potential Earth jutsu releases.)




Summon: Chibirami (female offspring of Shirami . Taught Hayame Sage Mode, but refused to be his summon. Instead, Shirami allowed Chibirami to be his guide as long as Hayame kept Chibirami safe)



Sage Mode Description:
Hair whitens and grows longer. White kimono, red markings everywhere. Eyes blacken:


Pros/Cons of Sage Mode (Shirami):
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+ Very large chakra pool
+ Fuuinjutsu and ninjutsu skill increased
+ Use of Samsara Calligraphy style
- Movement becomes hard due to increased chakra pool
- Taijutsu skill decrease drastically
- Metal inflicts burns.


Description of the character's personality: Laid back, caring, righteous, intelligent, cunning, respectful. Tries to avoid combat as much as possible but will go all out if needed. Works well in groups. Smokes cigarettes in order to focus his mind.



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« Last Edit: August 17, 2017, 14:39:19 by DarthTyrael »






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Re: Hayame [WIP]
« Reply #1 on: June 14, 2016, 15:04:02 »
Picture (hopefully) soon. And apologies it's so lacking at the moment.

About the picture, I haven't drawn ANYTHING for the past 4 years or so. Once I upload a picture, would anyone be willing to edit it and make it look... Well... Pretty? XD




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Re: Hayame [WIP]
« Reply #2 on: June 14, 2016, 15:43:44 »
I don't know if anyone would be willing to edit it, but don't be discouraged to post your art! Honestly we get some drawings posted that were made in MS paint in 12 seconds. I'm sure whatever you make will look fine. Like the character btw ^.^


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Re: Hayame [WIP]
« Reply #3 on: June 14, 2016, 15:51:22 »
Profile now has picture included ^^ quick sketch I made.




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Re: Hayame [WIP]
« Reply #4 on: June 14, 2016, 15:53:30 »
Looks good! (Also welcome to Roguhanta :D )


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Re: Hayame [WIP]
« Reply #5 on: June 14, 2016, 15:53:47 »
Profile now has picture included ^^ quick sketch I made.
But that looks good lol ^^


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Re: Hayame [WIP]
« Reply #6 on: June 14, 2016, 15:55:56 »
Looks good! (Also welcome to Roguhanta :D )
Profile now has picture included ^^ quick sketch I made.
But that looks good lol ^^

Haha thanks! Both of you ^^ I really have no idea how to use digital art programs. The rough sketch will have to suffice for now ^^;




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Re: Hayame [WIP]
« Reply #7 on: June 14, 2016, 16:21:52 »
Looks good, and don't worry about it being a sketch ^.^
It doesn't have to be a masterpiece, it's just to give a general look as to what you hope to look like in-game.

Off-topic: Welcome to Rogu o/



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Re: Hayame [WIP]
« Reply #8 on: June 14, 2016, 16:48:12 »
Looks real good! Welcome to Rogu and Sabaku.

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Re: Hayame [WIP]
« Reply #9 on: June 14, 2016, 17:00:51 »
Looks good, and don't worry about it being a sketch ^.^
It doesn't have to be a masterpiece, it's just to give a general look as to what you hope to look like in-game.

Off-topic: Welcome to Rogu o/

Looks real good! Welcome to Rogu and Sabaku.

Thanks both of you ^^




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Re: Hayame [WIP]
« Reply #10 on: June 14, 2016, 18:21:30 »
Smokes cigarettes in order to focus his mind.
That's the excuse I tell myself too xD
Anyways it looks good, looking forward to the history
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Re: Hayame [WIP]
« Reply #11 on: June 14, 2016, 18:34:16 »
nice, much better than anything I could do xD

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Re: Hayame [WIP]
« Reply #12 on: June 14, 2016, 18:40:06 »
That's the excuse I tell myself too xD

I feel you XD

nice, much better than anything I could do xD
Best advice I can give: "Don't give up!"
(And be sneaky. I absolutely can't make feet. What's missing in the picture I uploaded? XD)




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Re: Hayame [WIP]
« Reply #13 on: June 15, 2016, 00:13:37 »
...
Anyways it looks good, looking forward to the history

@Zama Go nuts, History has just been added :)




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« Reply #14 on: June 15, 2016, 01:23:12 »
That's lovely man, really nice storytelling...I'm attached.

I love how...different everything is. Definitely one of my favourites, great fricking job ;)

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