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Offline tomurn

Yundama Himitsu
« on: May 23, 2015, 18:22:16 »


Name: Yundama Himitsu
Age:20
Gender:Male
Height: 5'11"
Weight:190
Hairstyle:Long Pony tail
Facial hair:none (yet)
Hair color:Dark brown
Eye color:Black
Blood type:
Primary chakra nature:Earth
Village: Hidden Metal
Clan:N/A
Good or evil at heart?:Good

Description of the character's personality:Yundama has always been an honest countryman he is completely loyal to the hidden Metal and will do anything to make sure the village is secure.

Description of the character's history:Yundama was raised in the Hidden metal to a father who was a renowned shinobi of the metal Mindama Himitsu The White Lotus of the Metal, his mother was a chunin until having children, her oldest. Yundama along with 2 younger boys were left to fend for themselves when Yundama's father died in an S ranked mission while infiltrating an enemy nation. Since then Yundama was stuck between raising his brothers and serving his homeland, as a genin he had little time to himself. His mother left on a basic mission to make piece with the Hidden Thunder and returned months later. She was different, she was succumbed by depression over the loss of a her husband and had done terrible things, things that made her a rogue ninja and an enemy to the hidden thunder and its allies.

Yundama knew his mother had changed but did his best to hide her behavior from his siblings, he would play ninja with them, he would take them to the river to fish and through this experience Yundama gained a very large sense of how to lead others. He became the father his brothers never had. He had to discipline them because his mother was off on "missions".

Yundama came home one night to find his house in tatters and his mother missing, he lead his brothers to a safe spot in the forest they found while playing games and made sure they stayed there. Yundama used the little bit of sensory skill he learned in school to track his mother. He found her standing above a man and wife shinobi of the hidden metal with a kunai raised above her head. Yundama hid in the bushes near by, the man who was beaten almost to death looked up and said "Jenkai Himitsu wife of The White Lotus what have you become? Your husband was a hero of the Metal, your son a star pupil in the acadamy why go rogue and bring shame to your family?" Yundama's heart sunk...in the back of his mind, he knew, strange murders and missing persons have been happening in the area but Yundama couldn't get himself to believe it. *Jenkai looked at the man, and grinned*"what family do i have left!" as she raised the kunai high above her head to strike the man with one final swoop she launched her arm downward onto him! as she opened her eyes and looked down at the man she was shocked to see their was no blood, their was no kunai! From the bushes where Yundama lay in wait he stopped the Kunai with a hidden ability he didnt know he had...the magnet release.He held the kunai above her head and said "Jenkai Himitsu you are an enemy of the Metal, and it is my duty to subdue you at all cost for those i love and my village, I will protect them." Jenkai looked at her son and in that brief moment the man  jumped grabbed the kunai and drove it through the top of jenkai's head...she died instantly, Yundama was only planning on subduing her not killing her, he used his new magnet ability to pull the man to him,  in the seconds before murdering the man that killed his mother, he felt a hand on his thigh...it was his younger brother who was scared he left him so he came to find him , Yundama withdrew with his sibling.

A few short days later Yundama was called into the council of the Hidden Metal. He was bombarded with questions about knowing of his mothers involvmetn in criminal acts which he said he had no idea. he thought it was depression. an elder with the same marking as Yundama interrupted the questioning and said one phrase "Inoshishi: the way of the boar." they all looked at him with a confused look on their faces. He said one who has strong love and the willingness to protect the ones he loves at all costs. He will train under me until further notice and he walked out of the room. Yundama was completely shocked, he had never seen this man before yet he seemed to know everything about Yundama. Another Day passed when a little piglet wandered up to Yundama's door, on it was a scroll that said "I am your life, feed me and I will become strong and meaningful, forget about me and I will wither and die" Yundama looked at the little pig and thought "now along with 2 brothers i have a rotten pet? Great! Later that week Yundama was sitting meditating when this little pig charged him and headbutted him right in the chest. The blow knocked Yundama about 15 feet back into a tree, from the forest he heard a soft chuckle, so he went to explore and found the Elder sitting on a rock with three metal orbs floating around him. he said "It's about time Inoshishi, i sent you that pig a week ago. Yundama had completely forgot that man had said his life was like that of a boar. the old man looked and said "well, Shall we begin?"

Years passed and Yundama became adept in the ways of the Magnet release. His companion the "little piglet" is now a 500 Lbs boar named Minshi in honor of his father and the name Inoshishi. For his last mission under the help of the Magnet Elder, Yundama was to Seek out an Organization among the villages and nations with Shinobi just like him raised in the way of specific Zodiac. Yundama and Minshi will start their Journey together to seek out one in the hidden Hill.

The Rest of the story is yet to be told....



 
« Last Edit: July 22, 2015, 13:20:30 by tomurn »


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Re: Yundama Tekedashi
« Reply #1 on: May 23, 2015, 18:24:55 »
Looks like a nice character, though I'd like to see you expand the history. It'll give Yundama more depth.
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Re: Yundama Tekedashi
« Reply #2 on: May 28, 2015, 07:08:13 »
I like it! Is the marks on the face symbolizing you as Inoshishi?  :) I would like to see some stuff about the org in here in your history
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Re: Yundama Tekedashi
« Reply #3 on: May 28, 2015, 22:12:05 »
I like it! Is the marks on the face symbolizing you as Inoshishi?  :) I would like to see some stuff about the org in here in your history
Yeah I did this very quickly, I am going to really work on it and make a kick ass story...hopefully haha
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Re: Yundama Tekedashi
« Reply #4 on: May 30, 2015, 05:01:32 »
That background pic...is epic, did you draw it yourself?
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Re: Yundama Tekedashi
« Reply #5 on: May 30, 2015, 09:07:13 »
Just realized you expanded the history.
Really nice man! :D
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Re: Yundama Tekedashi
« Reply #6 on: June 04, 2015, 19:27:59 »
That background pic...is epic, did you draw it yourself?

I agree with this ^^ Boss drawing.
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Re: Yundama Tekedashi
« Reply #7 on: June 05, 2015, 00:46:19 »
That background pic...is epic, did you draw it yourself?

I agree with this ^^ Boss drawing.
No i didnt, I should have put a reference to the artwork, thats my bad...I attempted somethign similar but it didn't look as good so i just used what i thought was cooler. i am no artist
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Re: Yundama Tekedashi
« Reply #8 on: June 10, 2015, 07:36:10 »
My father died wile he was with me outside the village, i hope that the unknown assasin who killed my father was not your father, because if it was, i will get my revenge . Nice story thought, see you in game.
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