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Author Topic: 剣客 Hikatsuri  (Read 22651 times)

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Offline AY0

剣客 Hikatsuri
« on: February 28, 2017, 13:19:46 »
剣客 Hikatsuri



Founder's

AYO & Keyn


 
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We go by ranks, and the ranks go by skill. even the founder can be surpassed.


Allies

None, We do not trust no one. Only ourselves.

Enemies

Anyone that gets in our way

Affiliation

Rogue

History

Coming Soon...
Purpose/Goals

Goals: Become The Organization With the best Swordsman(Kenjutsu Players) Couse Toxicity Among The World

Purpose: Collect All Legendary Swords

Unique features

Kenjutsu Expert Skills
Expert Toxicity Skills.


Members(5)

Leo 1) Just Beginning to learn

Keyn 1) Just Beginning to learn

Ayo 1) Just Beginning to learn

bobbybnx 1) Just Beginning to learn

Pow3R 1) Just Beginning to learn


Ranks

1) Just Beginning to learn

2) Attain some achievements
 
3) Work whith sword

4) Outstanding

5) Swordsman 

6) Divine Sword Talent

7) Unrivalled With Sword

8.) Sword Master

9) One With The Sword

10) Surpass Th World

Rules:~

Respect your members , and follow ur founders rules.

Application

Username:

Why you want to be in Hikatsuri:

Are you Toxic?

How many friends in this community u have?



« Last Edit: October 09, 2020, 13:59:02 by AY0 »


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Offline Fraudulent

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Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #1 on: February 28, 2017, 13:32:46 »
This guy's on crack.
Good luck with this.
internet sensation
also known as Snoopy
has a bigger dick than you

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Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #2 on: February 28, 2017, 13:47:01 »
This guy's on crack.
Good luck with this.
😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 lol
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Offline AY0

Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #3 on: February 28, 2017, 15:17:33 »
This guy's on crack.
Good luck with this.

 Says The Guy Whith the Name "Snoopy" Lol
 :D
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Offline StriderOtaku

Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #4 on: February 28, 2017, 15:24:25 »
This guy's on crack.
Good luck with this.
I agree. I agree with both sentences.
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the crack is strong with this one
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Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #5 on: February 28, 2017, 16:46:08 »
This is maybe the most ugliest lay-out i've seen on an org.

gl.



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Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #6 on: February 28, 2017, 16:48:28 »
the layout is a bit broken lel
GL with the org my guy

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Shout out to CaioDarT and Rapho for the character image!

Offline Manuster

Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #7 on: February 28, 2017, 16:58:27 »
Ignore the hate buddy, you got a great thing going here!!!!

I've even +repped to show how much I like the idea!!!!

One little tip though:
Maybe change the yellow and white font as that is hard to read?

And having an afro as a requirement may restrict you on what members could join. What if one of the best kenjutsu users are bald?

As cool as your organisation logo is, maybe try reduce the size?

End your life?

You could've proofread your story as there are a lot of spelling errors.

Maybe hold back a bit with tab and spacebar? There are a lot of unnecessary spaces that make the entire post disjointed and hard to read.

Read a couple other organisations to get an idea of how to present yourself to be taken seriously. No one will want to join an organisation that is so poorly presented.

Think about it this way; if you can't put effort into your own organisation, then why would anybody else?
« Last Edit: February 28, 2017, 17:02:57 by Manuster »
RIP my old sig, got too annoying for even me

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Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #8 on: February 28, 2017, 17:54:45 »
Well good luck I uh well yeah good luck!


It's original
Let the power of youth wash over you and fill you with strength!


-lethal dankness

Offline taigakun

Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #9 on: February 28, 2017, 18:42:58 »
Eyyy i like this!!
Good luck bro


Offline AY0

Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #10 on: February 28, 2017, 20:39:25 »
Ignore the hate buddy, you got a great thing going here!!!!

I've even +repped to show how much I like the idea!!!!

One little tip though:
Maybe change the yellow and white font as that is hard to read?

And having an afro as a requirement may restrict you on what members could join. What if one of the best kenjutsu users are bald?


As cool as your organisation logo is, maybe try reduce the size?

End your life?

You could've proofread your story as there are a lot of spelling errors.

Maybe hold back a bit with tab and spacebar? There are a lot of unnecessary spaces that make the entire post disjointed and hard to read.

Read a couple other organisations to get an idea of how to present yourself to be taken seriously. No one will want to join an organisation that is so poorly presented.

Think about it this way; if you can't put effort into your own organisation, then why would anybody else?

Ty For The Suppurt alredy Edited
Used to Hate On My Posts
Not chaging the afro idea



There Mutch Better! lol



This is maybe the most ugliest lay-out i've seen on an org.

gl.
Here Better Now?
« Last Edit: February 28, 2017, 23:46:54 by Nova »
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Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #11 on: February 28, 2017, 23:42:26 »
Please refrain from double triple posting. Instead click on 'Modify' to edit your previous message.
@Nova  you should probably fix this for him and remove the excess posts.

Bye~~
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Offline Manuster

Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #12 on: March 01, 2017, 04:24:06 »
Ignore the hate buddy, you got a great thing going here!!!!

I've even +repped to show how much I like the idea!!!!

One little tip though:
Maybe change the yellow and white font as that is hard to read?

And having an afro as a requirement may restrict you on what members could join. What if one of the best kenjutsu users are bald?


As cool as your organisation logo is, maybe try reduce the size?

End your life?

You could've proofread your story as there are a lot of spelling errors.

Maybe hold back a bit with tab and spacebar? There are a lot of unnecessary spaces that make the entire post disjointed and hard to read.

Read a couple other organisations to get an idea of how to present yourself to be taken seriously. No one will want to join an organisation that is so poorly presented.

Think about it this way; if you can't put effort into your own organisation, then why would anybody else?

Ty For The Suppurt alredy Edited
Used to Hate On My Posts
Not chaging the afro idea




Honestly, jokes aside, the idea is good, great actually. There's no other organisation that focuses only on Kenjutsu (afaik).

What is likely to hold you back were the initial comments, it doesn't really give off the best image.

NEVERTHELESS, good luck to the org, I personally hope you get some help with the story; not everyone's a born storywriter. ;)

And hey, you like black guys with afros fighting with big ass swords, who am I to complain?
RIP my old sig, got too annoying for even me

Offline AY0

Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #13 on: March 01, 2017, 10:06:57 »
I Decided To Put The REAL STORY of this organization! There you go Guys
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Offline ziSwav

Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #14 on: March 02, 2017, 10:57:31 »
Bruh , U Played AOW
I Was There The Dude Was One of The 7Immortal Thats Why he Was using Ancient Tai Chi Sword
Btw I Want to Join i Was Rootless In AOW
I'm zKen
I Heard About You in AOW Soo its True u Do Exist 
Its Here were you been ?  The Beggar Sect Immortal Told Me You Was Here in this Game/Forums
I Like This Game ill Stay Here Whith You
Your One of The 5 Wudang SwordsMen?
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