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Author Topic: 剣客 Hikatsuri  (Read 9149 times)

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Offline AY0

剣客 Hikatsuri
« on: February 28, 2017, 13:19:46 »
剣客 Hikatsuri



Founder

Ayo

Leader/SubLeader

Ayo | Leader

Keyn | SubLeader

HeadSwordsman

bobbybnx
 
Spoiler: show
HeadMaster is Like a 3rd Leader , or a Commander


Allies

None, Never Going to Have

Enemies

EveryBody

Affiliation

Rogue

History

An Organization Founded By AY0

AY0 Had The Dream Of Gathering the Best Swordsman in Shinobi World,With Hes Friend Keyn Becoming SubLeader

They Worked in this organization - Rootless Swords

They Didint want friends they wanted to couse pain, but pain to those we didint like

 we didint almost everybody, and they discovered that good organizations must work for a village, they didint like it
they didint want to do it..

ShinobI's tought Rootless.Swords was rogue
but all Rootless wanted  was freedom ... ppl wouldnt go for the looks of Rootless

we wanted to be master swordsman but we didint know how to use a sword, months passed ayo and keyn changed their name to Katsuki Swords
Changing  the org a little bit

ayo and keyn  tryed to convince that the org wasnt rogue,but shinobis didint believe it

Ayo and Keyn Decided to Get Stronger , They trained to every day to be swordsman. They lived by the swords

Ayo had an bad personality liked to troll and kill alot

Keyn didint show a bad personalty , he defended his self, he was good

they growed and stronger untill they realized they become quite strong  with improved kj skills.

They changed the org name hikatsuri and took serious as a swordsman org, with 10  ranks, being a dificult org , they reach to rank 6 "Divine Sword Talent"

                                           Recruiting and Recruiting Members But with time they disapeared, 

while all this happening Ayo Earned a Bad Reputation to the organization.Ayo & Keyn had no choice

they became rogue, but months passed , and with time stoped the insane practice leaving their skills behind

months passed and Ayo tryed to train again revive his spirit of swords man, while he was training

he met a swordsman , named Bobbybnx  an swordsman similiar to him, Ayo knowing hikatsuri stopped.. he recruited him

later he became HeadSwordsman (3rd lider),bringing good swordsman to the org.. reviving it

                                                 Passed Months

Ayo was trying to steal some money from genin to donate to the organization founds, Ayo Searching For Genin He Found 5 Anbu Sorrouding
Him,

Anbu: STOP U ARE ARRESTED FOR BETRAYING HIDDEN THUNDER, STEALING, AND MURDER

Ayo Responding While Laughing

Ayo: Okey Okey.. May-
                    BAM! A kunai clashes into Ayo's swords
                        Ayo defended him self with hes reflexes

Ayo: Woahhh DID U SEE THAT *Amazed Face* I FEEL LIKE VREG , OVER POWERED

Anbu: ATTACK!

Ayo battled anbu  for several minutes draining his stamina

Ayo in middle of the battle got hit by 4 kunais on the back

a rushing kick towards Ayo's chest, while in the air he saw a member of hikatsuri in the air
with his last forces he trowed a smoke bomb and his sword, the sword cuts the smoke bomb 

Hikatsuri member enters the smoke and grabs Ayo

Ayo planned vengeace , but he was injured when he recovers he will bring Pain into the world

                                                        END
Purpose/Goals

Goals: Become The Organization With the best Swordsman(Kenjutsu Players) Couse Pain and Suffering

Purpose: Collect All Legendary Swords

Unique features

Kenjutsu Expert Skills
And All Players Must use a StrawHat Whith The logo there when in missions
(if u want u can just use it in your back)


Members(6)

Leo 1) Just Beginning to learn

Keyn 6) Divine Sword Talent

Ayo 6) Divine Sword Talent

bobbybnx 6) Divine Sword Talent

Pow3R 3) Work whith sword

Akitermoun 2) Attain some achievements

Ranks

1) Just Beginning to learn

2) Attain some achievements
 
3) Work whith sword

4) Outstanding

5) Swordsman 

6) Divine Sword Talent

7) Unrivalled With Sword

8.) Sword Master

9) One With The Sword

10) Surpass Th World

Rules:

Respect Your Lider/SubLeader & HeadSwordsman Or Else You Will Get Expelled

Always Wear the Color of the Vest that the Leader Wears

Application

Username:

Why you want to be in Hikatsuri:
 


« Last Edit: July 21, 2017, 16:22:12 by AY0 »


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Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #1 on: February 28, 2017, 13:32:46 »
This guy's on crack.
Good luck with this.
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Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #2 on: February 28, 2017, 13:47:01 »
This guy's on crack.
Good luck with this.
😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 lol
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Offline AY0

Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #3 on: February 28, 2017, 15:17:33 »
This guy's on crack.
Good luck with this.

 Says The Guy Whith the Name "Snoopy" Lol
 :D
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Offline StriderOtaku

Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #4 on: February 28, 2017, 15:24:25 »
This guy's on crack.
Good luck with this.
I agree. I agree with both sentences.
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the crack is strong with this one
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Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #5 on: February 28, 2017, 16:46:08 »
This is maybe the most ugliest lay-out i've seen on an org.

gl.


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Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #6 on: February 28, 2017, 16:48:28 »
the layout is a bit broken lel
GL with the org my guy

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Offline Manuster

Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #7 on: February 28, 2017, 16:58:27 »
Ignore the hate buddy, you got a great thing going here!!!!

I've even +repped to show how much I like the idea!!!!

One little tip though:
Maybe change the yellow and white font as that is hard to read?

And having an afro as a requirement may restrict you on what members could join. What if one of the best kenjutsu users are bald?

As cool as your organisation logo is, maybe try reduce the size?

End your life?

You could've proofread your story as there are a lot of spelling errors.

Maybe hold back a bit with tab and spacebar? There are a lot of unnecessary spaces that make the entire post disjointed and hard to read.

Read a couple other organisations to get an idea of how to present yourself to be taken seriously. No one will want to join an organisation that is so poorly presented.

Think about it this way; if you can't put effort into your own organisation, then why would anybody else?
« Last Edit: February 28, 2017, 17:02:57 by Manuster »
RIP my old sig, got too annoying for even me

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Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #8 on: February 28, 2017, 17:54:45 »
Well good luck I uh well yeah good luck!


It's original
Let the power of youth wash over you and fill you with strength!


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Offline taigakun

Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #9 on: February 28, 2017, 18:42:58 »
Eyyy i like this!!
Good luck bro


Offline AY0

Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #10 on: February 28, 2017, 20:39:25 »
Ignore the hate buddy, you got a great thing going here!!!!

I've even +repped to show how much I like the idea!!!!

One little tip though:
Maybe change the yellow and white font as that is hard to read?

And having an afro as a requirement may restrict you on what members could join. What if one of the best kenjutsu users are bald?


As cool as your organisation logo is, maybe try reduce the size?

End your life?

You could've proofread your story as there are a lot of spelling errors.

Maybe hold back a bit with tab and spacebar? There are a lot of unnecessary spaces that make the entire post disjointed and hard to read.

Read a couple other organisations to get an idea of how to present yourself to be taken seriously. No one will want to join an organisation that is so poorly presented.

Think about it this way; if you can't put effort into your own organisation, then why would anybody else?

Ty For The Suppurt alredy Edited
Used to Hate On My Posts
Not chaging the afro idea



There Mutch Better! lol



This is maybe the most ugliest lay-out i've seen on an org.

gl.
Here Better Now?
« Last Edit: February 28, 2017, 23:46:54 by Nova »
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Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #11 on: February 28, 2017, 23:42:26 »
Please refrain from double triple posting. Instead click on 'Modify' to edit your previous message.
@Nova  you should probably fix this for him and remove the excess posts.

Bye~~
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Offline Manuster

Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #12 on: March 01, 2017, 04:24:06 »
Ignore the hate buddy, you got a great thing going here!!!!

I've even +repped to show how much I like the idea!!!!

One little tip though:
Maybe change the yellow and white font as that is hard to read?

And having an afro as a requirement may restrict you on what members could join. What if one of the best kenjutsu users are bald?


As cool as your organisation logo is, maybe try reduce the size?

End your life?

You could've proofread your story as there are a lot of spelling errors.

Maybe hold back a bit with tab and spacebar? There are a lot of unnecessary spaces that make the entire post disjointed and hard to read.

Read a couple other organisations to get an idea of how to present yourself to be taken seriously. No one will want to join an organisation that is so poorly presented.

Think about it this way; if you can't put effort into your own organisation, then why would anybody else?

Ty For The Suppurt alredy Edited
Used to Hate On My Posts
Not chaging the afro idea




Honestly, jokes aside, the idea is good, great actually. There's no other organisation that focuses only on Kenjutsu (afaik).

What is likely to hold you back were the initial comments, it doesn't really give off the best image.

NEVERTHELESS, good luck to the org, I personally hope you get some help with the story; not everyone's a born storywriter. ;)

And hey, you like black guys with afros fighting with big ass swords, who am I to complain?
RIP my old sig, got too annoying for even me

Offline AY0

Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #13 on: March 01, 2017, 10:06:57 »
I Decided To Put The REAL STORY of this organization! There you go Guys
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Offline ziSwav

Re: Rootless Swords
« Reply #14 on: March 02, 2017, 10:57:31 »
Bruh , U Played AOW
I Was There The Dude Was One of The 7Immortal Thats Why he Was using Ancient Tai Chi Sword
Btw I Want to Join i Was Rootless In AOW
I'm zKen
I Heard About You in AOW Soo its True u Do Exist 
Its Here were you been ?  The Beggar Sect Immortal Told Me You Was Here in this Game/Forums
I Like This Game ill Stay Here Whith You
Your One of The 5 Wudang SwordsMen?
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